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Deawen felt comforted knowing Eldarion was behind her should anything happen. " Stand.." she heard her father tell her from echos of the past. " Stand Deawen"She was ten then, quick and agile but slightly faint of heart. She stood facing one of her fathers chargers, a lancer galloping straight toward her lance tip glinting in the sun. How she trembled, as she brought her sword up and then swiftly down upon the spear...
" Yes?"she asked as she saw who it was, she did not regonise the man.

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the man looked down at Deawen and pushed passed her. " Arwen...you give me nothing...i thought i said for you to have it to me tonight.." he demanded. he stare was angry and evil. his sword was already drawn and he was fearless. he stared the queen down.

Arwen sat there with grace and calmness. she had a dagger hidden in her sleeve. she knew this would come. she had forseen it. " i dont know what makes you think you will get what you want, but you will not have it.." she said with athority.
the man scoffed. " then shall i take it out of your child's flesh?" he said having one of his men bring out Raelyn. she was kicking and screaming but the sound of muffled by a gag that had been shoved in her mouth. her hands were bound and she looked like she had a black eye. "mother!" the sound came out muffled but you could tell she was scared.
Arwen did not make a move nor did her expression change. " put the child down.." she comanded.

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Eldarion couldn't handle it and it seemed like the man had not noticed him, and his dagger was already out. He wondered on what his mother and this man discussed, but he figured that they could settle that confusion when Raelyn was out of danger and his dagger was under the man's throat. Quickly, Eldarion pulled Deawen behind him, shoving her to the ground before leaping towards the man, his dagger extended in front of him.

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Deawen was pushed aside then grabbed by Eldarion and pushed down out of harms way. She got to her feet shaking but she unsheathed a dagger ready to fight. Who was this man? she asked herself " Release her!" Deawen growled to the man still shaking. She drew up even with her brother and took on a solid stance.

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Cedric gave out this loud chuckle. " men...keep them back." men started spilling into the room. " keep the queen sitting there. " cedric comanded. the man holding Raelyn threw her on the ground, Cedric with 2 steps walked over and picked up Raelyn by the back of her dress. " now queen...eaither you give me what i wish or i will do whatever i please to your dear child here. " he glared. Arwen wanted to stand up and punch the guy right in his head but she refrained. " we will speak about this when your minions are not around and we are in the presents of my children.." she spoke with even more athority. she braved standing up. her power was almost over coming her presance seemed to make the air a little uncomfortable. even cedric was getting nervous. " fine.." he snaped and all but two of his men left. " but i'm taking your child until we are able to speak again. he grabbed her and dashed out of the room.
once he was gone Arwen Colasped back into the chair. she looked at her other two children. "if you go after you will surly cause more trouble for us." she hated saying this but she knew of Raelyn's gift. she shed a few tears.

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Deawen whipped around astonished. " Mother!" she gasped " We cannot leave our sister to her fate!" She looked at her brother hoping for supoort on this. " we must retrieve her back now while they are still in the city!" Deawen was becoming hysterical. She began shaking from anger, " Mother we can't just leave her!"

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one last tear slip down her soft pale cheek. she raised her hand to Deawen. " Daughter, shh do not worry yourself. your sister will be fine. she is strong." she said almost having to remind herself as well.
she regained composure. " what i need to do now is explain to you what is going on. i shouldnt have kept this from you." she admited. " now please calm down both of you and sit." she said firmly.

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Deawen sat down hushed. She was still shaking but atleast she had become deathly quiet.

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Eldarion couldn't take no for an answer...couldn't....wouldn't!

Yet, he had to.

Eldarion, who had been thrown to the floor by one of the man's men, stood and sheathed his dagger, leaning against the door, angry, and confused. Not a good combination for Eldarion. He looked over at his mother, asking frantically, yet in a calm voice,

"Where were the gaurds? What do they want with Raelyn? Besides, it is I that has a Gift of some sort, not her!"

He blurted and then shut his mouth quickly. Eldarion cursed at himself for speaking so quickly without thought; he now gave away his secret. Foolish, Eldarion, foolish! He scolded himself silently.

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If Deawen heard her brother she showed little signs, she stared intently at her mother waiting for her to explain what was going on.
" Seems to me that Raelyn was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.. " she said cooly looking at her brother. " I mean as of today either one of us could be used as a pawn, to the throne...if thats what this is all about? " Deawen said as things began to form in her mind.

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(I'll make a move to put Eonera in the weaving of the plot... if there's anything that isn't okay with this post, just let me know and I'll edit it!)

Eonera leaned against the wall at the edge of the court yard with the white tree of Gondor. He was on the side looking North and gazed off in the direction of her home country. She day dreamed of the grass lands that were like miles of golden waves in everydirection. With the peaks of the white mountains to the South like great gardians watching over the Rohirrim.

A breeze blew her hair at the altitude, reminding her of the Easter-ward breeze that came from the gap of Rohan that ran across Edoras. Eonera could almost here the cries of horses in the distance. Wait... thats not the cry of a horse, that's the cry of a girl. And that's not a day dream...

Eonera looked around her, then spotted where she heard the muffled cries. All the way on the other side ofthe courtyard a bunch of men walked out of a door and were heading to the gate to the lower levels of the white city. When they looked around, Eonera turned quickly and acted as if she hadn't noticed them.

Her acting worked. They continued on. Eonera had noticed that they were dragging a struggling Realyn amungst them. Where they the same men who shot arrows at us earlier? She wondered, and decided to follow. This was bad news...

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Arwen spoke finally. " the man who took your sister, cedric is his name, is fighting for the throne. but some others are rallying behind him. evil people, not orcs, elves, dwarve(sp) but men, evil hard hearted men. Cedric talks a good talk but he will distroy the white city and every land if he gets a hold of the kingdom. " Arwen took a deep breath. " unfortunally he has won over part of our armies, that means he has army power. he has threated us as well, and now he is using Raelyn " she choked up when she said her daughters name, she was more scared for her then she let on. " as levrage....we must get your sister back, that is our first priority...now..he also wants something else...a marrige...to the next queen......" she said giving hint as to whom was to be in rule. she looked at Eldarion hoping he wouldnt be hurt by his father's decision of making his sister Deawen the queen. Arwen wouldnt tell either one of them which girl it would be.
she looked at the two seriously. " now, you both tell me what your opinions are." she said.

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Deawen got up silently and went to the casement (window) she stared out formulating her thoughts. " Marriage to Raelyn? " she asked without turning. " We have to get Raelyn back before that happens, "

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Deawen got up silently and went to the casement (window) she stared out formulating her thoughts. " Marriage to Raelyn? " she asked without turning. " We have to get Raelyn back before that happens, "

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Deawen got up silently and went to the casement (window) she stared out formulating her thoughts. " Marriage to Raelyn? " she asked without turning. " We have to get Raelyn back before that happens, "

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Eldarion looked down at the ground for a moment, listening to his mother as she explained things, as the pieces began to unfold and reveal themselves, and go together. In her bad state, she must not have heard his outburst about having a Gift...which was good. He blinked a few times, processing everything together...Raelyn was being used as levirage...that much he got. Cedric was the man's name...such a noble name to be wasted on such a dog. Raelyn was young though...suddenly, all the pieces fit, or so Eldarion thought.

"I don't think it is Raelyn that he plans to marry, Deawen." Eldarion said slowly, not looking up until he was done speaking. If Cedric was using Raelyn to try and gain the throne...then he would pick an older, more natural leader from the Royal Line as his wife. Which only pointed one direction;

Deawen.

But, where did that leave him? Obviously he wasn't going to be king, even if they did stop Cedric...it was for Deawen, her destiny. He kinda felt in his heart that he would not be chosen, and he trusted his fathers judgement. Raelyn would be a maid of honor, for sure. Eldarion looked down again, thinking hard. His abilities and rare gift could get him far...maybe he could travel Middle-Earth as an Ranger, of sorts.

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