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PostPosted: May 15th, 2006, 12:47 pm 
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these are poems that i write and i feel like posting them

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PostPosted: May 15th, 2006, 12:53 pm 
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No scar?
Hast thou no scar
No hidden on foot,side,or hand
I hear the song as mighty in the land
I hear them hail thy bright ascendant star
Hast thou no scar
Hast thou no wound
Yet I was wounded bythe archers spent
Leaning me against to die and rent

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PostPosted: May 15th, 2006, 12:58 pm 
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This wasnt by me but i like it


With a sigh
you turn away
with a deepening heart
no words to say
you will find
that the world has changed forever
and the trees are now turning
from green to gold
and the sun is now fading
i wish i could hold you closer

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Those are really lovely poems. :) You're a good poet! But I think this thread belongs in Fan Art. ;)

Again, really nice job -- I hope to see more from you!

(Oh, you can also take note of the edit button on each of your posts -- that way you don't have to double or tripple post)

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PostPosted: May 15th, 2006, 3:18 pm 
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thank you so much and ill try to keep in touch ive got alot more where these came from and these poems have nothing to do with lotr why would they belong in fan art ^_^

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Send them to a site that deals in poetry! Those are pretty!

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I think what Gwen meant was the "Fanfiction and Poetry" section ;)


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thank you all i didnt even think they were that good but if you want more just email me and i can update you on all the latest

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PostPosted: May 21st, 2006, 1:30 pm 
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new poem
The eve of Battle

the bows of warriors are broken
the strength of men wanes
in the shadows armies await
we are leagues away from our doom
we know our fate
but we will fight to the end none the less
eyes that glow like red flame acsend from beneath the helms of our enemies bravert
but in our eyes only fear and chiverlous bravery
we ride to war lives are lost and men slaughtered
newly spilt blood lays soft on the grass of te battlefeild
the war has silenced
ere the sun rises
hope finnds its way into the hearts of men

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