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Post subject:  Posted: October 24th, 2006, 8:16 pm |
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Woo hoo. Thanks for your reviews guys.
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Post subject: Posted: October 25th, 2006, 1:58 am |
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Wow, that was a pretty good bio, Nauriel. I really like the first-person perspective. At some points the punctuation made it a little hard to understand, but overall it was really good.
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Post subject: Posted: October 25th, 2006, 12:18 pm |
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Agree's with Aerandir. Very good, Nauriel. And Aerandir, I love your Elvish banner! It's really quite amazing! (sorry to cahnge the subject guys)
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Post subject: Posted: October 25th, 2006, 7:08 pm |
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Aerandir wrote: Wow, that was a pretty good bio, Nauriel. I really like the first-person perspective. At some points the punctuation made it a little hard to understand, but overall it was really good.
Is it my overly zealous use of commas? I tend to do that a lot. I really like commas and I don't know why.
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Post subject: Posted: October 26th, 2006, 7:42 am |
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Thanks, Turwaithiel!
It's that and the spelling, mostly, Nauriel. Beyond those trivial sort of things, though, it's great.
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Post subject: Posted: October 26th, 2006, 8:11 pm |
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I think you're good on commas, Nauriel. My problem - like this - is dashes. I have a thing for dashes.
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Post subject: Posted: October 26th, 2006, 9:15 pm |
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when I'm casually having a conversation, typoes and bad grammar abound every other word. but for rpgs, I'm a grammar freak. I love commas and dashes.
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Post subject: Posted: October 26th, 2006, 10:19 pm |
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I like dashes too, and semicolons. I have to be really careful or I end up using dashes in every sentence, I love them so much.
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Post subject: Posted: October 27th, 2006, 1:16 am |
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Lol, I tend to just be a grammar freak. If I see I made a typo, I backspace and correct it. I've got a pretty good head for spelling (compared to my friends, at least) so I don't normally have to worry about that, but it does bother me when I spell a word wrong and I'm not sure what the right way is.
EDIT: I just made a new character....anybody want to review him, and give me some constructive criticism? http://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/viewtop ... 699#584699_________________
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Post subject: Posted: November 1st, 2006, 2:20 pm |
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[font=Times New Roman, serif]TRICK OR TREAT GIVE THE NAZGUL CANDY[/font]  :vampire::vampire::vampire::vampire:
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Post subject: Posted: November 1st, 2006, 6:15 pm |
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*dumps candy into the Nazguls' bags as fast as she can*
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Post subject: Posted: November 1st, 2006, 6:21 pm |
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*does a belated [s]Trick or[/s] Treat or you shall suffer*
*looks around for LDM*
'ello...LDM??? When I finally come over for a visit, you're not around???
*grabs candy from Elenya*
*decides to act sane for a change to add to the conversation*
Correct spelling and grammar - or at least a decent try at getting right is much appreciated. Whatever in a random post or a paper, it leaves a good impression and makes you want to read further.
By the way... I find it interesting that no RPing is actually going on in the RPers Club...
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Post subject: Posted: November 2nd, 2006, 12:24 am |
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Anduril Vanlhach wrote: [font=Times New Roman, serif]TRICK OR TREAT GIVE THE NAZGUL CANDY[/font] :vampire::vampire::vampire::vampire:
Eh, go somewhere else. This is my candy! *hordes candy*
Do any of you find your self constantly checking to see if someone responded to your post in an RP? I do that all the time. I'm doing it right now! Its driving me crazy. I post a few places, then check the RP. I post a few more places, then check the RP. And still no one has responded! I can't take it any more! *Huddles in corner, shaking*
EDIT: My post in the RP is still unresponded to. Ahhh!
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Post subject: Posted: November 2nd, 2006, 12:47 am |
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I do that a lot too! I'm always coming back to the pages to check. Which RP hasn't anyone posted on? I will if I'm in it!
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Post subject: Posted: November 2nd, 2006, 4:33 am |
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Nauriel Rochnur wrote: Do any of you find your self constantly checking to see if someone responded to your post in an RP? I do that all the time. I'm doing it right now! Its driving me crazy. I post a few places, then check the RP. I post a few more places, then check the RP. And still no one has responded! I can't take it any more! *Huddles in corner, shaking*
EDIT: My post in the RP is still unresponded to. Ahhh!
You could use use the feature where you get an email notification whenever someone responds... perhaps you could relax a little bit more that way... *coughpatiencecough* At least the few RP's I've been in, people were were slow to respond, mainly due to time differences...  _________________ >>Be the change you wish to see in the world<<
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Post subject: Posted: November 2nd, 2006, 7:20 am |
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Lol, I'm constantly checking, and while I could use the email notification feature, I don't, because I hate getting emails like that. They drive me crazy. So I constantly check to see if anyone's replied to my post, though I about six hours ahead of most of the people on this forum....
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