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Golden leaves
transparent and green.
Blue waterfalls,
heathery downs.
Green rolling Hills,
deep blue lake.
Signs of spring,
Winter begone,
summer awake.

River unfrozen,
cherry-white trees,
the Joy of Spring,
unceased.
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Last Breath,
egde of Battle,
despair in the air,
hope lost everywhere.

Victory gone, out of reach,
we've been defeated,
so now's our retreat.
The cry of Battle,
worried faces,
harsh language,
the signs of Battle.
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Hope renewed,
hope returned
all fixed and new,
worrieness gone.

Shouts of joy,
signs of Peace,
fruitful land,
too happy to speak.

Wholesome fruit,
tears to my eyes,
this is the land
I've been looking for
all my Life.
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Whispering night,
loud winds,
silent forest,
what lies within?

Creatures, beasts and gods,
wood-women and well-women,
Dryads and Naiads.
Hooting owls,
nature awakes,
these are the sounds,
of a undisturbed Wood.
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You gave your life up for me,
for everyone in this sinful world..
Dear Lord.

Teach me your ways,
help me to find you,
lead me from the darkness..
redeem me.

I'll be a born again Christian,
a defender against all evil,
and a Warrior for you.

Help me put on the armor
of Salvation...
and to grow and know you till
the end of my days...
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Death in eyes,
Icy cold stare..
Stainless blood
unreasoned love.
Sorrowful life,
painful goings,
dont look at me,
because I'll be going.

Gnawed teeth,
black skin,
burning fire,
help me and I'll live.

Meanful glares,
piercing looks,
hatred fills the air
with your mere look...
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Just a thought,
Unbelieveable it may seem.
Let it go,
In you I will believe.
Anticipate it, hold it, never let go.

Maybe it will come back,
At the dawn of spring.
Eventually this thought will be retrieved.

Just another thought,
Entrust it, I will,
Never let it go.
Show your courage,
Enlist your thought; make it happen.
Never give up...just never let go.
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Heart of Stone,
eyes at rest,
take the sword
and go to your
Quest.

Beating heart,
sweat on skin,
the cry of battle
is near at hand.

Sharpen your sword,
bend the bow,
harness your horse,
it's time to go.

Don't despair,
strike the last blow,
all depends upon
You.
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Every moment I breath
someone is gasping for air.
Every time I eat,
someone is dieing of starvation.

Whever I put shoes on my bare-feet,
someone is freezing bare-footed.
Whenever I laugh and think,
someone is writhing in pain.

And every time I go to sleep,
and had a wonderful day with
no harms,
someone is being thankful to God
for all he hath given them,
even if they are at Death's doors.
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Melt the Snow
clear it away
winter be gone,
spring awake!

Primroses, lilacs and
roses I see.
Tree's, grass, it's all
coming back to me.

Rustling leaves,
all golden and green
showers of birds emerge
from the tree's.
Winter has gone,
this is Spring,
open your eyes,
behold the sight.
It cannot replace
the feeling it gives me.
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Im working hard,
no harms flow around
me. All content, with peace
and joy. Until it struck me,
like a tidal wave, she is gone, no
more to stay.

Dripping blood surrounds her
head, hit harshly, a common
mistake. Steam fills my face,
tears well in my eyes,
she is really gone, no more
to stay.

Angry, sad all at once,
I realize now, I've lost a
loved one.

Up in my room,
the darkness concealing me,
I write this poem for her,
so she shall stay with me.

One thing I know,
and something I hoped,
that this was not her real home,
but up and above.
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Better than spring,
better than summer,
and most of all,
it is better than winter.

The perfect weather, the
happiest time of year,
sadness all gone from everyone
this year.

Thanksgiving,
Halloween,
decorative holidays...my
what a sight.

I wish...that it will say forever.
Just Autumn,
just Fall,
just here forever.
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Isn't it great
to realize that
your alive? Soaring
and flying up in the sky.
Always a exciting moment,
the next chapter better than
the last.

What if life was not
so great? An empty void
of nothingness? How dreadful
that would be. How would you
handle it? With Courage? Hope?
Or foolishness and wrath?

Choose the path you
want to take. The path that
you can't turn back on. Be wise,
use your wisdom, there's no
turning back...no, there is
no exit.
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I am healed, healed
from all wounds. The pain has
passed, is out of my
bones. Here I sit, in this
house, so lonely..cold,
no one to comfort me.

Not Until I saw him
on the wall, did my hope falter
back to me. A lordly man he
seemed, but what am I?
A woman in his dreams?

I longed to be with him,
to speak, laugh,
and be comforted at last.
Ah! at last, I have found what
I have been looking for all
this time without knowing it;
a comforter, a healer, a man
of power to be ...Mine
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Fierce warrior that
he is. Proud, stubborn
and strong. Has skill with
the bow, and the steel blade,
can master anything in his way.

What destiny lies within? Hidden
in his troubled mind.
Unbreathing soul that
is mine.

Son of the
Shadows, a black-
crowded mind, it's not his
fault, but mine.
It shouldn't have turned
out this way! Sweet sorrow,
it's just a black void.

Darkness crept over him,
because of his master, swore
an oath that cannot be
taken back.

In the end he will choose,
to fight back and choose his
own fate, or keep his dark oath
that he swore to control him
evermore.

At the end the light
shall prevail, he shall be
his old gentle self again. With his
head held high, no
darkness will control
him again!

The dark oath of
his master will be taken
back. To control him no more. Only
his Destiny will guide him,
a destiny that shall choose his fate.
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Bitter frost kills
the night. A stinging
pain out of sight.
Sighing, screaming,
bleeding in pain, oh
help me from this pain.

Its like a cold
dagger, killing my
skin, you dont understand
the pain. Pain thats lighting,
it cannot be stopped, just
cry till it stops.

Tears like steam roll
down my cheeks. I cant
take it anymore...will
anyone help me?

Killing. Biting. Glaring.
Snagging. Flaring. Snarling.
Whipping. Hissing. Harassing.
Save me from this Pain.

A new poem is up. ^^

WOW TN! Your great! I could never write so well! I like your new one alot, but I would advise you to change the color, it hurts your eyes trying to read it after a minute.

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lol. alright. thanks SG! lots of ppl view this page; but do not reply.

I agree with SG... I could never write anything like that. brillint job.

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I was cured all right.

awww..thanks you guys! Ill post more up soon, once I find a decent one. I am just trying to make my poems a little bit longer.

Your writing is amazing TN! I love the imagery you use-their is just so much emotion in your pieces-I love it! You choose your words perfectly! I love all of your poems! Great job and keep up the great work!

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AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!

wow...thats all i can say right now. they're absolutely amazing! i love the imagery and the references to God. very nice and touching.

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thanks, both of ya's.

I posted a new poem up ^^

*bump* dont want my thread to die

great stuff but try moving away from actually naming objects of nature and use vivid words instead to describe the scene

other then that, woohoo!

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why take away naming objects of nature?

more poems added ^^