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Post subject: Too Much  Posted: January 26th, 2007, 8:07 pm |
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no one is gonna read it..but..
This was just too
much. You're killing
me inside. Breaking me
and twisting me, bending
me deep within. What have
I done to deserve this? Why
has your wrath fell
upon me? In your eyes I am
a mere speck of dust, you hate
me, hate me, kill me.
Let the pain come
slowly, so that I may
die sorrowfully. Every
drop of blood that I shed, I shall
drink to burst myself. I do
deserve this pain, I have
seen now what I have done,
do not spare any more mercy
upon me...just let me get
over with it. Strike me
speedily with the stroke
of your swift blade,
exceedily accursedly, I am
in pain. With no tears gliding
from my eyes, only blood do
I weep. I can only hear
myself screaming, let me out, let
me out. I am sorry, but sorry
is a word that is not familiar
to your ears, what is the
meaning..what is the meaning
of this? For you do not know...
how this feels. Writhing in my
own misery...this was my end,
I was destined for it. This is how
my life ends. I was cursed
with a miserable one, not a
joyful tear-less one. Woe
upon woe, I cannot be remade.
This is me.
This is who I am.
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Post subject: Posted: January 30th, 2007, 8:43 am |
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Joined: 23 November 2006
Posts: 107
Location: Middle earth with Strider
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I read it! That's awesome! keep writing this stuff, for me at least. I like it!
_________________ Smile till u laugh, laugh till u cry 
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Post subject: Posted: January 31st, 2007, 1:04 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Hey, nice job. It is well written I think.
Not only that I can really relate to the subject. I wount bore anyone with the details but nice job. 
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Post subject: Posted: February 4th, 2007, 9:43 pm |
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haha..thanks. 
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Post subject: Posted: February 5th, 2007, 12:11 am |
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Joined: 21 August 2006
Posts: 4076
Location: Out Walking
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I like it! Great job. TrueNarnianForever!
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2007, 6:22 pm |
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thanks TN..
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2007, 7:49 pm |
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Joined: 23 October 2005
Posts: 8345
Location: Rivendell
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Hey, you guys are both TNs.
Nice poem. I could never write anything close to that even if I tried... which I dont. _________________ 
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~art credit~
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Post subject: Posted: February 21st, 2007, 9:36 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005
Posts: 11221
Location: In a world of magic and mystery
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Wow, excellent use of dark imagery TN! I love the emotion in the piece-it would probably go well on a graphic of some sort. Great job! _________________ 
AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!
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