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PostPosted: September 23rd, 2006, 6:13 pm 
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I wrote this in like 2 mins......jsut some random feelings i had to get out.......So anyway, it's not the greatest. Just let me know wut u think anyways!! :bye2: :-D



Confused

I look at you,
and our eyes meet.
And I smile.
I can’t help it.
And to my joy,
you smile back.
My heart begins to rush;
My head, to spin.
Every time I talk to you;
Every time I smile at you;
Every time I even look at you,
I feel like I’ve gone through a storm;
Like everything is a blur…
And once we’re separated;
Once we’re apart,
Suddenly, everything is clear,
again.
I can think straight, again.
But as soon as I see
you, again,
It just happens all over.
Heart beating,
Head rushing;
Everything is a blur.
How it is
that you do this to me,
I don’t know.
How do you do this,
to me?
My friend,
I can see.
My cousin,
I can understand.
But me?
I lose my mind
over
No one.
No one,
that is,
Until
I met
you.
I feel like
I’m drowning.
I want to spend
Every moment,
of everyday,
With you.
But as soon
As you
Come near,
I run away.
My heart is rushing,
My head is spinning;
I don’t understand.
How?
Why?
How do you do this?
Why, do you do it, to me?
Do you mean to?
Are you secretly laughing?
Secretly thinking how stupid
I am, to actually believe,
that you might like me?
Or are you genuine?
Are you being true?
Do you have any idea
Who I am?
I know you know me;
I’ve talked to you before.
But do you know me?
I want you to know me.
And yet,
I don’t.
Life is so confusing;
It makes no sense.
My heart is rushing,
My head is spinning;
And I am so confused.
Does all love feel this way?
I think this is love…
Is this love?
Or is this me,
Being stupid?
Is this me,
thinking that you
Might actually be the one?
It makes no sense.
I try to forget;
Try to say that
I’m not in love.
But who am I kidding?
Not me.
No, I’m not kidding
my heart.
My heart knows;
It knows what I really
Feel.
Love.
Is it love?
I don’t know.
I don’t know what to think,
anymore.
My heart is rushing,
My head is spinning;
And I am so
Confused.

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PostPosted: September 26th, 2006, 3:26 pm 
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Wow... that sure describes the emotion I would imagin in such a situation!

IO never personaly been in such a situation really but that is always how I imagined it would be. Very nicely done. :)

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PostPosted: September 28th, 2006, 4:03 pm 
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thanks, Jax. & i hadn't been until this summer over 1 guy, & now, over another. lol So basically, I'm new to this whole thing. lol :-P Anyway, thanks 4 the input! glad u like it as always!! :-D

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lol Yeah, the whole things soudns pretty complicated with all that kind of stuff.

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*hits head on wall* u have no idea. lol :)

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*sighs*

lol Sometimes I just wish things were a little more clear.

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*nods* Me too. It's like, OK God, I'm trusting you.....I know u'll lead me in the right direction.......but cant u just cum down & be like DO THIS!!! lol it would be SO much easier!! lol :)

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The poem was really pretty! I cried lol. You know who this is. I didn't know thats what you felt like. lus ya!!

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pip&leggyluvr wrote:
*nods* Me too. It's like, OK God, I'm trusting you.....I know u'll lead me in the right direction.......but cant u just cum down & be like DO THIS!!! lol it would be SO much easier!! lol :)



LOL no kidding!

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lol. :-D

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Very good, Pip!! I liked the way it described the situation so well. :)

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thx Arwen :)

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